Monday, 23 September 2013

100 word challenge - the giant pot

I heard a kick from a monstrous angry pot that seems to want something.
I peered though a bush to see what it was doing.
It saw me and charged towards me,I ran and grabbed a long stick.
But I tripped over a tree root in the ground.
I saw its huge gnashing gaping pointy red teeth.I whacked it with the stick I had.
It said "I just wanted to play with you"
I nodded "ok"
So the giant pot and I trotted off to play hide and seek in the garden.

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1 comment:

  1. Some fantastic description in this 100WC. Well done, Lauren.I love the idea of the legs being gnashing teeth....great imagination! My only suggestion might be that you need a few commas to separate the list of words which describe the teeth. keep up the good work.